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story 1D test not finnal copy

Fri Oct 30, 2009, 5:16 PM
  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: how stuff works podcast
  • Reading: sea of monsters
  • Watching: Mythbusters
  • Playing: New Super Mario Bros.
  • Eating: NOTHING
  • Drinking: water
Disclaimer: i cant write the right way so I'm not gunna have people talking much it mostly gunna be narrated. i wrote this in saturday SAK so it may be rough at times. bear with me. not final edition. and begin


I awoke. First I created time. I saw the outcome of everything that shall ever happen. Ever. I then created emotion. After creating emotion I took another look at all of time. I was saddened by most of the things that will happen but I suppose the end justify's the means. I then created morality(good and bad). I saw that most emotions are bad, and most of time is bad so I needed something good. I created Light and I saw that it was good. Pondering what to do I looked ahead to see what I was going to do. I saw that I was going to create seven dimensions. I did. I then named them. first heaven, second hell, third, earth, fourth aroshium, fifth moronium, sixth null, seventh Morofien. I saw that Heaven, Aroshium and Morofien were good, so I blessed them. The others i did not bless.I grew tired, I desired to rest. I choose Heaven to reside in. I did. It was dark, I gave it light. there was no ground, I gave it a soft workable ground. It was not holy, I gave it golden pillars that made it holy and held up the sky. I slept. I awoke. I grew lonely. I decided to create helpers. The first I made I named Lucifer. The second I named Michael. I gave them a ring of light so that they may have it even where I have not yet illuminated. I gave them wings so that they may fly through the heavens like I do. they had golden blood. they were perfect, they do not need to eat, sleep or breath. I then gave them life.

It was god narrating incase there was any confusion.
Notes: Yes, god looked into forward to see what the would do, he is not yet omnipotent( or watever the one its where he knows all) for he has not yet made himself that. Yes, he is a guy. its hard righting this story having a shred of common sense and knowing how the world works. its hard staying logical talking about god... but i digress. this is not the end but lucifers part is much longer and would take forrever to write. if u have any questions, conserns, quitics, or ideas plz reply.
lucifers part will come up soon...
*lucifers part is way better than this. i was half asleep when i wrote it soo...ya lucifers part is 8 pages so far on a college ruled note book. its not finished yet.

Q. how dose this tie in to my characters?
A. they are mentioned in lucifers part and are a huge part of the story but not yet.

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